Flaunt of the sunshine I need not your bask—lie over! You light surfaces only, I force surfaces and depths also. Earth! you seem to look for something at my hands, Say, old top-knot, what do you want? Man or woman, I might tell how I like you, but cannot, And might tell what it is in me and what it is in you, but cannot, And might tell that pining I have, that pulse of my nights and days. Behold, I do not give lectures or a little charity, When I give I give myself. You there, impotent, loose in the knees, Open your scarf'd chops till I blow grit within you, Spread your palms and lift the flaps of your pockets, I am not to be denied, I compel, I have stores plenty and to spare, And any thing I have I bestow. I do not ask who you are, that is not important to me, You can do nothing and be nothing but what I will infold you. To cotton-field drudge or cleaner of privies I lean, On his right cheek I put the family kiss, And in my soul I swear I never will deny him. On women fit for conception I start bigger and nimbler babes, (This day I am jetting the stuff of far more arrogant republics.) To any one dying, thither I speed and twist the knob of the door, Turn the bed-clothes toward the foot of the bed, Let the physician and the priest go home. I seize the descending man and raise him with resistless will, O despairer, here is my neck, By God, you shall not go down! hang your whole weight upon me. I dilate you with tremendous breath, I buoy you up, Every room of the house do I fill with an arm'd force, Lovers of me, bafflers of graves. Sleep—I and they keep guard all night, Not doubt, not decease shall dare to lay finger upon you, I have embraced you, and henceforth possess you to myself, And when you rise in the morning you will find what I tell you is so.
Afterword
What remains unsaid inflames the imagination, according to the laws of poetry. “Man or woman, I might tell how I like you, but cannot,” Whitman writes in this section, “And might tell what it is in me and what it is in you, but cannot,/ And might tell that pining I have, that pulse of my nights and days.” What is it? Poets are in the business of seeking words to describe the force that animates the interior lives of every man and woman. Whitman’s reticence before the mystery of desire is intriguing: mindful of the limits of language, he seems to suggest that the real meaning of his words, what he says between the lines, in white space, will become clear only ages hence, when his radically inclusive vision of democracy has been translated into many tongues.
Meanwhile he embraces cotton pickers and privy cleaners, and conceives children fit for “arrogant republics,” and raises the dying, guarding one man through the night. He is joined in spirit by his lovers, the “bafflers of graves” who billet in the house, like a militia. (No one is left defenseless in Whitman’s scheme of things.) And when in the morning the man rises from his deathbed the poet tells him a truth, which the reader cannot hear.
In the woods by the reservoir, on a mild summer afternoon, I find winter’s leaf fall, trees downed by the spring storms, and patches of Queen Anne’s lace blossoming along the trail to the bridge. I like it in the shade, where voices reach me from invisible boats anchored just offshore. My thoughts turn from the complications of work and travel to other possibilities, and now I know that pining and its pulse are what form my life and writings. Henry Miller called Whitman that “rude hieroglyphic,” which I take to mean the furnisher of signs of what was most ancient in our bodies and souls—and of what lies always beyond our field of vision. A voice calls from the water, another answers, and laughter rises from afar.
C.M.
Question
Whitman sometimes seems to tap into old folk epics and tall tales to create the enormous power of his “I.” Davy Crockett, one of the heroes of the Texas Revolution and a man known as “king of the wild frontier,” had many tall tales told of his exploits. One legend seems related to this section of “Song of Myself”: “One January morning,” Crockett relates, “it was so all screwen cold that the forest trees were stiff and they couldn't shake, and the very daybreak froze fast as it was trying to dawn. … Well, arter I had walked about twenty miles up the Peak o' Day and Daybreak Hill I soon discovered what war the matter. The airth had actually friz fast on her axes, and couldn't turn round; the sun had got jammed between two cakes o' ice under the wheels, an’ thar he had been shinin’ an' workin’ to get loose till he friz fast in his cold sweat. C-r-e-a-t-i-o-n! thought I, this ar the toughest sort of suspension, an’ it mustn’t be endured. Somethin’ must be done, or human creation is done for.… I took a fresh twenty-pound bear off my back that I’d picked up on my road, and beat the animal agin the ice till the hot ile [oil] began to walk out on him at all sides. I then took an’ held him over the airth’s axes an’ squeezed him till I'd thawed 'em loose, poured about a ton on’t over the sun's face, give the airth’s cog-wheel one kick backward till I got the sun loose—whistled ‘Push along, keep movin’!’ an’ in about fifteen seconds the airth gave a grunt, an’ began movin’. The sun waked up beautiful, salutin’ me with sich a wind o’ gratitude that it made me sneeze. I lit my pipe by the blaze o’ his top-knot, shouldered my bear, an’ walked home, introducin’ people to the fresh daylight with a piece of sunrise in my pocket.”
In this tall tale, we get Crockett handling the sun and getting a light from the sun’s “top-knot” (a term for a decorative knot of ribbons or a tuft of hair on the top of one’s head). Whitman, too, seems to be handling the sun in the opening lines and interacting with the Earth, whom the poet calls “old top-knot” (a comic term once used to refer to American Indians, some of whom wore their hair in knots). What is the effect of Whitman’s including elements of tall tales in his poetry? Is this section comic in its bravado, in its hyperbolic claims of power? Or do the comic elements help sustain the seriousness of the poet’s claim of interpenetrating power?